I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Monday, 12 November 2018
Cooper's blogging mistakes!
today we looked at coopers blog to find out some informasionit about him was good! but he shared some privet stuff like his password username his birthday and lots more things at we don't need to know about him or as!.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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hi Lewis
ReplyDeleteI like your explation about what cooper told us and fixed it up for him
Good job fixing it up