t4w1 2018 writing

I had to write a letter to review a place I visited in the holidays.

42 Amuri Ave,

Hanmer Springs 7334

15/10/18

Dear Hanmer Springs Pools

I came to your pool’s in the school holidays and I love all of your pool’s. They are so amazing and you have so much fun in the pool’s and out of the pools. You have good life guard's the life guard's are not mean to you. There are good rules and good food. I love all of the water slides. I like it how you put some spa pool’s out the back of the food place, it will make more people come and buy food or come to the pools. I like how you put a rock pool in and you make it so there is a rock spa pool next to the rock pool. Hanmer Springs is so fun, I like the thing at dries your togs when they're wet in the changing rooms. I like it how you put a lizard slide in the little pool for little kids. I like how you put some showers in the changing rooms

You could improve it by doing this stuff. You could take some of the rocks out of the rock pools. You could make a diving pool and you could make a pool for babies. It would be good if you could put some floaties in every pool, not just the lazy river. You could put some more little slides and some more big slides too. You could make it so you can eat food in the pools and you can drink stuff in the pools. You could make a very cold pool just if you want to get cold or you're silly like me! You could make the changing rooms a bit more worm and it would be way better, way more people would come and buy more food.

From Lewis!