I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, 23 November 2018
14 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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it is so cool renaming a bluebere i loved the all the strong words that you haven riten
ReplyDeleteHi Lewis, This is Sam from Yaldhurst Model School,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good post with a whole
lot of writing, this is a lot of words
for your age, and that's a good thing!
Next time, could you please work on your spelling
Sam
thanks for the comment sam i will use the icvice i will use it next time thankyou!
DeleteHi Lewis, its Ian from Rimu class. I loved how you wrote this. Maybe nextime you could reread your spelling
ReplyDeletebut other than that it was great. This reminds me when I write my own stories. Did you enjoy doing this ? Kind
regards Ian.
yes i did enjoy it thankyou for the comment
Deletehi lewis it is jayden i like how you have shapes for it now it looks like a reay
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ReplyDeletewow lewis i love how much detail you have i think the shapes could have some coulor but good job i don't think you need to improve anything from brayden f your friend
ReplyDeletehi Brayden thank you for the comment. also thank you for the advice of telling me to add more color onto the shapes. do you think this is a good blog post?
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hi Lewis my name is Bailey i like your story dude.
ReplyDeletehi again bailey thank you for the comment again now i have ten comments on this post thank you
Deletehi Lewis my name is AJ i like your story bill the blueberry:)
ReplyDeleteHello AJ thank you for commenting on my blog.
Deletehi I am Harry
ReplyDeleteI really like the bill the blue berry.