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Friday, 23 November 2018

bill the blueberry

This week we made our own book i made a book called Bill the blueberry. 

14 comments:

  1. it is so cool renaming a bluebere i loved the all the strong words that you haven riten

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  2. Hi Lewis, This is Sam from Yaldhurst Model School,

    This is a really good post with a whole
    lot of writing, this is a lot of words
    for your age, and that's a good thing!
    Next time, could you please work on your spelling

    Sam

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    1. thanks for the comment sam i will use the icvice i will use it next time thankyou!

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  3. Hi Lewis, its Ian from Rimu class. I loved how you wrote this. Maybe nextime you could reread your spelling
    but other than that it was great. This reminds me when I write my own stories. Did you enjoy doing this ? Kind
    regards Ian.

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    1. yes i did enjoy it thankyou for the comment

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  4. hi lewis it is jayden i like how you have shapes for it now it looks like a reay

    from jayden

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  6. wow lewis i love how much detail you have i think the shapes could have some coulor but good job i don't think you need to improve anything from brayden f your friend

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    1. hi Brayden thank you for the comment. also thank you for the advice of telling me to add more color onto the shapes. do you think this is a good blog post?
      from lewis

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  7. hi Lewis my name is Bailey i like your story dude.

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    1. hi again bailey thank you for the comment again now i have ten comments on this post thank you

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  8. hi Lewis my name is AJ i like your story bill the blueberry:)

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    1. Hello AJ thank you for commenting on my blog.

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  9. hi I am Harry
    I really like the bill the blue berry.

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