I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Monday, 27 May 2019
Lewis how to make a comment!
we were learning to make a thoughtful comment.
we made poster to share what we have learnt with you.
when we made a poster we had to make a positive thoughtful helpful poster with a question and a greeting. our posters had to be colorful and bright but not to bright so you can still read it easily.
if you like my poster please leave a comment. 8
7 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hey Lewis,
ReplyDeleteI do like your poster and your description of what you did helps me know what you were learning to do. I wonder if you should use a capital letter for each step? Are blue and red your favourite colours?
- Miss Morgan
Kia ora Lewis. I really like how you are talking about how to make a comment. It is a really good poster:) good job the best part i really like is when you coloured it ><() did you enjoy doing the poster? From devran :)
ReplyDeleteHi Devran thank you for the comment and yes i did like making the poster. did this tell you how to make a comment? from Lewis.
Deletehi lewis brayden here i like how you have put some effort into this i also like all the coulour in it i don't think you need to work on anything how did you put the letters like that
ReplyDeleteHey Lewis you are doing a great job i like how you have dun this i love your work
ReplyDeletehi bailey thanks for the comment
DeleteHi lewis
ReplyDeleteI like how you made it a slide so you don't have to take a screenshot.
I also made a poster about how to comment but I diden't finish it.
next time if you do a slide please make a few more slides then 3 so that they are not all jammed onto one slide?
from Taylor