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Tuesday, 18 September 2018

My First Post EVER!

Hi my name is Lewis and I live in Christchurch and im 8 years old I have a brother and I like to do motocross.  My motorbike is a ktm50.
I like to go camping my favorite place to go is lake ohr c
my best friend is jayden Hasan and devran also dylan.  
I have 3 dogs 1 cat and 2 rabbits and a fish
I love to go to the park with my brother zack and some times  jayden .
I like scootering and my best friend is jayden


I like to go on holidays my favorite place to go is Australia there is heaps of cool things to do like go to the Australia Zoo!. 



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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 September 2018 at 13:28

    Kia ora Its Zack here. from yaldhurst model school.(your brother)

    I loved this because. you siad how you like to go too the zoo and you have 4 dogs. you brought me back to when I did my first post. Next time you could wite a descipen about why you liked the zoo and why do you like to go to the park with connor hasan and quinn. What is your favorit thing to do on your list. Anyway good job I cant wait to see some more work on your blog.

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    1. Anonymous4 June 2019 at 09:59

      my favorite thing is to go to motocros

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  2. Anonymous24 October 2018 at 10:13

    i love your writing :)

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  3. Unknown24 October 2018 at 10:16

    I love your letter because you talk about motorbikes. Next time maybe you could tell more about yourself.
    From Connor

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